Here’s a ROUGH draft of a poem I’m working on…
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I’ve neglected to record the signs when I encounter
the dismayed cries of two sparrows
caught in the aluminum rafters
of the high school in the early morning, the feeble
light creeping in the upper windows
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the dead purple petals
of a flower plucked
and pressed between the pages of a wedding program
tucked in a volume of poetry, forgotten
opened for an impromptu discussion
of the history of love
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the familiar hum of rain
on roof and splash in gutter
is the same, here
as home
though, I pause,
here is home now
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the one inch steel gauges
in the earlobes of your favorite drop-out
“Cristina” tattooed across the brown chest
peeking above the collar of his uniform
the rush of profanity uttered from his lips
briefly subsides “I realized…”
and he’s coming back
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the offender at the Jester III service,
Christmas eve, whose enlightened eyes fixed your gaze
from the front riser of the soprano section
missing his left leg, knee onward
stopped, balanced on his crutches
shook your hand
and you thought, ‘ whatever you do
to the least of these…’
and you were grateful
that God had paused and called
you (worthy of the title) “least”

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December 17, 2009 at 2:23 am
Michael Ochoa
Good start… deep, very deep… nice images and form. I will need to read this many times to understand it all.
December 17, 2009 at 3:36 pm
Allison
There are so many great images and ideas at work here! I’m not sure if it will all stay as one poem, or maybe a small collection of several – because it seems like each “verse” takes us to its own conclusion, although they are all unified.
Some of the line breaks I might look at again – the one that stood out the most to me was in the 2nd stanza between history/of love.
Thanks for sharing (and for writing poetry…!)